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Sounds Familiar

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i. engine churns:

the dog's left at home,  
he agitated Her again
and all he can hear
is the motor burning.

ii. his whines grow hoarse:

wrapped windows bind sunshine
but he sniffs for it
when he knows daylight
won't comfort him.

then the walls grow mold,
as its paper falls off
and folds into the
depressions of the floor.
(he claws to get out)

he has itches to scratch out
of his bowl-like stomach;
his nose is dry,
starving to be happy.

spilled milk is now spoiled,
but he laps it up
as the
heater cooks his home,
makes him cry again.

iii. postcard said She flew north:

She left without a care,
but he's still waiting;
sounds familiar.
majorly edited!

Old version -
there's a dog at home,
and he's tied to the door.
(he can hear the motor run)

he sniffs for the sun,
but daylight can't comfort him.
(he stares at the boarded window)

he has itches to scratch,
while butterflies swell inside.
(his whines sound hoarse)

walls start to grow mold,
as its paper falls off.
(he claws to get out)

spilled milk is now spoiled,
but he laps it up.
(his nose is dry;
starving to be happy)

heater starts to burn,
and the floor starts to melt,
making him cry again.

he's still waiting;
sounds familiar.

nobody told him
that she will leave
without a care.
now he'll die
with no one there.
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brain-tree's avatar
I really love this poem.  Your diction is beautiful, and purely strange, as always.  And here it is soaked in cold reality.  It drips regret...hits bone.  Great work.